Bob 158,598 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Check out my movie. It's going to win awards, I tell ya. www.digitalfilms.com/play.php?id=608666 Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Alk 199,757 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 BRILLIANT!! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Bob 158,598 Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 Thanks, Alk. Look for "Jets Chat II," coming soon to a message board near you. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Verde 134,775 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 So minimalist! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
gg 118,796 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 won't load for me Quote Link to post Share on other sites
PatsFanTX 29,854 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Check out my movie. It's going to win awards, I tell ya. www.digitalfilms.com/play.php?id=608666 PatsFanTX's review of Bob's movie: Final Grade: D (just like the Jets draft) Rationale: 1). Entirely too long. Need to trim down the repititious scenes. 2). Too many characters. Tough for the average viewer to keep up with so many. Try cutting down next time. 3). Plot is poorly constructed. Poor development of the protagonist and the antagonist. Need much better development to strengthen plot. 4). Absolutely no nudity. Knocks the entire movie down from a A- to a D. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
NJ 132,948 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Next stop Hollywood Bob - Nevermind Tx he's just jealous (although I'm with him on the nudity - just a thought for #2) Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Bob 158,598 Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 won't load for me Buy a computer. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
gg 118,796 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Buy a computer. <insert specific swear here>... how good could it be if it is not accsessible to all Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Bob 158,598 Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 PatsFanTX's review of Bob's movie: Final Grade: D (just like the Jets draft) Rationale: 1). Entirely too long. Need to trim down the repititious scenes. 2). Too many characters. Tough for the average viewer to keep up with so many. Try cutting down next time. 3). Plot is poorly constructed. Poor development of the protagonist and the antagonist. Need much better development to strengthen plot. 4). Absolutely no nudity. Knocks the entire movie down from a A- to a D. 1. Nonsense. 2. It's called "dialogue," from the latin root "di," meaining "two." 3. Agree, but that brings us back to #1. 4. You wanted to see those guys naked? Critics. Geez. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
PatsFanTX 29,854 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 4. You wanted to see those guys naked? Critics. Geez. That one made me laugh. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Green DNA 174,416 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Excellent character development. I was afraid to get up to pee in case I missed something. the suspense was unbearable and I never expected that ending. Bravo! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Savage69 10,349 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Check out my movie. It's going to win awards, I tell ya. www.digitalfilms.com/play.php?id=608666 Move over Scorsese,Tarantino and Spielberg! There's a New man in Town!! Bravo Bob it's the Documentary Moore wishes he could make!! Quote Link to post Share on other sites
SoFlaJets 104,082 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 ...I laughed...I cried..... Quote Link to post Share on other sites
Panzer Division Marduk 301,426 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Screw Star Wars. This rules. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
dickkotite 15,726 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 So minimalist! hes the john coltraine of filmmaking Quote Link to post Share on other sites
stormshadow19 2,840 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 To the point... I like! You have a future in shorts, my friend. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
PatsFanTX 29,854 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 To the point... I like! You have a future in shorts, my friend. Bob lives in other guy's "shorts". Good one Storm. Quote Link to post Share on other sites
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