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Check out my movie. It's going to win awards, I tell ya.

www.digitalfilms.com/play.php?id=608666

PatsFanTX's review of Bob's movie:

Final Grade: D (just like the Jets draft)

Rationale:

1). Entirely too long. Need to trim down the repititious scenes.

2). Too many characters. Tough for the average viewer to keep up with so many. Try cutting down next time.

3). Plot is poorly constructed. Poor development of the protagonist and the antagonist. Need much better development to strengthen plot.

4). Absolutely no nudity. Knocks the entire movie down from a A- to a D.

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PatsFanTX's review of Bob's movie:

Final Grade: D (just like the Jets draft)

Rationale:

1). Entirely too long. Need to trim down the repititious scenes.

2). Too many characters. Tough for the average viewer to keep up with so many. Try cutting down next time.

3). Plot is poorly constructed. Poor development of the protagonist and the antagonist. Need much better development to strengthen plot.

4). Absolutely no nudity. Knocks the entire movie down from a A- to a D.

1. Nonsense.

2. It's called "dialogue," from the latin root "di," meaining "two."

3. Agree, but that brings us back to #1.

4. You wanted to see those guys naked? :shock:

Critics. Geez.

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