Bob Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Check out my movie. It's going to win awards, I tell ya. www.digitalfilms.com/play.php?id=608666 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alk Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 BRILLIANT!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 Thanks, Alk. Look for "Jets Chat II," coming soon to a message board near you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verde Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 So minimalist! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gg Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 won't load for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PatsFanTX Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Check out my movie. It's going to win awards, I tell ya. www.digitalfilms.com/play.php?id=608666 PatsFanTX's review of Bob's movie: Final Grade: D (just like the Jets draft) Rationale: 1). Entirely too long. Need to trim down the repititious scenes. 2). Too many characters. Tough for the average viewer to keep up with so many. Try cutting down next time. 3). Plot is poorly constructed. Poor development of the protagonist and the antagonist. Need much better development to strengthen plot. 4). Absolutely no nudity. Knocks the entire movie down from a A- to a D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NJ Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Next stop Hollywood Bob - Nevermind Tx he's just jealous (although I'm with him on the nudity - just a thought for #2) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 won't load for me Buy a computer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gg Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Buy a computer. <insert specific swear here>... how good could it be if it is not accsessible to all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Posted April 26, 2005 Author Share Posted April 26, 2005 PatsFanTX's review of Bob's movie: Final Grade: D (just like the Jets draft) Rationale: 1). Entirely too long. Need to trim down the repititious scenes. 2). Too many characters. Tough for the average viewer to keep up with so many. Try cutting down next time. 3). Plot is poorly constructed. Poor development of the protagonist and the antagonist. Need much better development to strengthen plot. 4). Absolutely no nudity. Knocks the entire movie down from a A- to a D. 1. Nonsense. 2. It's called "dialogue," from the latin root "di," meaining "two." 3. Agree, but that brings us back to #1. 4. You wanted to see those guys naked? Critics. Geez. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PatsFanTX Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 4. You wanted to see those guys naked? Critics. Geez. That one made me laugh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Green DNA Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Excellent character development. I was afraid to get up to pee in case I missed something. the suspense was unbearable and I never expected that ending. Bravo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Savage69 Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Check out my movie. It's going to win awards, I tell ya. www.digitalfilms.com/play.php?id=608666 Move over Scorsese,Tarantino and Spielberg! There's a New man in Town!! Bravo Bob it's the Documentary Moore wishes he could make!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoFlaJets Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 ...I laughed...I cried..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Panzer Division Marduk Posted April 26, 2005 Share Posted April 26, 2005 Screw Star Wars. This rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dickkotite Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 So minimalist! hes the john coltraine of filmmaking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stormshadow19 Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 To the point... I like! You have a future in shorts, my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PatsFanTX Posted April 27, 2005 Share Posted April 27, 2005 To the point... I like! You have a future in shorts, my friend. Bob lives in other guy's "shorts". Good one Storm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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